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    Hey, guys, how ya doing? I'll admit, last couple of days, I have really active here, good to see the fast replies. Anyways few months ago I've posted a thread named : I would like to publish a book but kinda scared ? (http://banglagamer.com/showthread.ph...t-kinda-scared) << Is the link, all of you have been a great help but now I want you, people, the gamers of this website who are also book worms to read my book and think about it, feel free to ask anything about it (Note: Things that aren't introduced or unexplained shall not be explained unless it was written in the book)
    so...THIS IS FOR BOOKWORMS!!
    Here is the link for reading the book online, it's a cool website, just click 'Start at Beginning' and then you'll be able to read my book without any signing in craps. It's a anime-style action, adventure, fantasy, comedy. here is the link >> http://figment.com/books/532003-Adventures
    P.S. My pen name is Priom Hitsugaya, guess you know where the name comes from. Priom is my actual nickname whilst Hitsugaya is a name from a (extremely) famous anime/manga character, his name is Hitsugaya Toushiro. Also, I posted the book before my final proofread, so there might be bit of error in it or not, I don't know. Enjoy!!!

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    Did you guys read it? What did you think? Obviously, you should know that I did not post the entire book on that website

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    No one read it yet? Gotta be kidding me right?

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    No one read it yet? Gotta be kidding me right?

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    71 views and not even a single comment? You should have realized that I couldn't post the book here.
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    hmm boring.
    I think most gamers don't like to read books.
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    ^yah, bro...
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    ^ My rating _ -2 out of 10 _ boring _ happy now - - - and please don't post two thread with one topic in future
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    I gave the first 500 words a read.

    Here's what I think,

    a. Your thoughts (and thus, words) are all over the place, giving the entire thing a rather messy outcome.

    b. It's rather boring, and fails to really engage the reader.

    Still, at 13, it's probably a job well done, congratulations.
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    At least he has the patience required for writing such a big story.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ahnaf_i7X View Post
    hmm boring.
    I think most gamers don't like to read books.
    That's why I told only 'BOOKWORMS' to read it
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    Quote Originally Posted by DarkFire View Post
    That's why I told only 'BOOKWORMS' to read it
    Good luck finding bookworms among gamers.
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    Quote Originally Posted by masum1181 View Post
    ^ My rating _ -2 out of 10 _ boring _ happy now - - - and please don't post two thread with one topic in future
    I did not post this thing twice, it was because of laggy internet speed 中中, it got double posted...Plus!!! You didn't like my book? Then why did foreigner did in figment? You're calling my book to be boring? How do you find Humayun Ahmed's books to be great and fun? Those books are full of dialogues, and still you like his books? Good thing he's dead now, he had to be dead cause of his sins. If you can, write a better book...

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    Quote Originally Posted by masum1181 View Post
    ^ My rating _ -2 out of 10 _ boring _ happy now - - - and please don't post two thread with one topic in future
    I did not post this thing twice, it was because of laggy internet speed 中中, it got double posted...Plus!!! You didn't like my book? Then why did foreigner did in figment? You're calling my book to be boring? How do you find Humayun Ahmed's books to be great and fun? Those books are full of dialogues, and still you like his books? Good thing he's dead now, he had to be dead cause of his sins. If you can, write a better book...
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    Wrong forum to post about ur book bro .. Congrats for the try though
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    Quote Originally Posted by Codex View Post
    I gave the first 500 words a read.

    Here's what I think,

    a. Your thoughts (and thus, words) are all over the place, giving the entire thing a rather messy outcome.

    b. It's rather boring, and fails to really engage the reader.

    Still, at 13, it's probably a job well done, congratulations.
    Your review on the book didn't even compare 中中 to what the guys did back in figment. Boring you say? Messy? Write something better, let's see it. There were a lot of people at that website who got engaged into that book, and I know the reason why you, people like you didn't, you wanna know why? Well, you already know it, jealous of me? If your not, write something better than mine, post it on figment, wait for the readers to read and give their thoughts and comments on it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Codex View Post
    I gave the first 500 words a read.

    Here's what I think,

    a. Your thoughts (and thus, words) are all over the place, giving the entire thing a rather messy outcome.

    b. It's rather boring, and fails to really engage the reader.

    Still, at 13, it's probably a job well done, congratulations.
    Your review on the book didn't even compare 中中 to what the guys did back in figment. Boring you say? Messy? Write something better, let's see it. There were a lot of people at that website who got engaged into that book, and I know the reason why you, people like you didn't, you wanna know why? Well, you already know it, jealous of me? If your not, write something better than mine, post it on figment, wait for the readers to read and give their thoughts and comments on it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ahnaf_i7X View Post
    At least he has the patience required for writing such a big story.
    *Mocking* At least he has the patience required for writing such a big story. I've written bigger books, I have been writing books for over 3 years now, currently, after sometime, I will start to write my fifth book.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ahnaf_i7X View Post
    Good luck finding bookworms among gamers.
    Got a point there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by N鬳zh緳 塉h駩 View Post
    Wrong forum to post about ur book bro .. Congrats for the try though
    Finally, someone who posted a compliment, thank you
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    I was just browsing through BG, saw this post and read!
    Listen boy, apni amar boyosh er ordhek er chaiteo choto! Tarpor o apnake apni bolchi. Keno? Cause ami ekjon reader ar apni writer. Apni amar jonne likhen. Ar ami apnake famous kore tuli! Kichu respect to petei paren tai na!
    Now read me, Ami bookworm na kintu porar obbhash amar bhaloi ache. apnar boi ta pori nai. Porar iccha o more geche. You are a writer, we aren't. We will say anything good/bad. So apnar criticism tolerate korar khomota thakte hobe. Otherwise public er jonne likha chere den! Jodi apni ebhabei react korte thaken apnar book er reader ekjon e thakbe je apnar ghorer aynar bhetor bondi. Apni chara keu dekhte o pabe na!
    Twilight er director millions of dollars khoroch kore movie make korsen. Amra onekei movie tar poster dekhleo gali dei! Dekha to durer bepar! Director kauke bolen nai 'er chaite bhalo ekta movie banaye dekhao' he's on his way to success and got some huge amount of fans too. Maybe you're one of them!

    The thing is, if you couldn't handle the heat of the haters you are not even eligible of being loved! At first do some anger management, otherwise career shurur agei manush matichapa diye debe! Ar jodi nije ke shamlate na paren amra apnar boyosh er dosh dhore nebo!
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    Agree with @Ustad bro..
    And here's some quotes for u little bro (@ Darkfire!)
    These r copied frm internet though (but i've selected these specially for u!)
    1.Patience is bitter, but its fruit is sweet.
    Jean-Jacques Rousseau
    2. The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it.
    Arnold H. Glasow
    3.With love and patience, nothing is impossible.
    Daisaku Ikeda
    Why so Serious!
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    What type of piss poor attitude is that? You INVITE criticism and then you talk back that way? Maybe get some common sense first before writing a book.
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    dat age!!! Reminds me of someone infamous in this forum! Asholei aishob boyosher dosh.
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    @DarkFire

    curious abt the website ... who made it ? when was it

    we have different choices ... some like green while others like red
    let alone the writing skill ... different topics attract difeeerent frame of minds ..
    take for example gaming - u will see many ppl are only addicted to something like COD or DOTa ? and online gaming ... some small games perhaps ... u ask when ?
    well with age with time passing u get into a groove .. this changes makes u seem things differently .. many senior persons still do play games but in a choosy way ... if u alter abt that history u will find they perhaps were used to playing games at one point everything and anything .. form what mario pacman to ... crysis ?


    @Ustad bhaia r kotha gulo poro ... try to take in his words too ... why dont u try to adopt simple sentences and get rid of complex ones .. just keep in mind its abt making a reader understand tht way get into them ... no more frm me today
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    The amount of redundancies and grammatical errors are comical...you shouldn't be challenging others to write a book.

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    Quote Originally Posted by genocide_cutter View Post
    why dont u try to adopt simple sentences and get rid of complex ones
    They aren't complex sentences by any means, just redundant ones.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DarkFire View Post
    Your review on the book didn't even compare 中中 to what the guys did back in figment. Boring you say? Messy? Write something better, let's see it. There were a lot of people at that website who got engaged into that book, and I know the reason why you, people like you didn't, you wanna know why? Well, you already know it, jealous of me? If your not, write something better than mine, post it on figment, wait for the readers to read and give their thoughts and comments on it!
    Come on man .. Seriously???? FIrst e praise korsilam for a good try but now I see u r an arrogant little... something .. Grow up !!! I think shakespear er writing boring.. [i dont] .. does that mean I m jealous of him?? does that make him a bad writer ?? .. Like someone already said .. learn to digest criticism .. and keep trying...
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    >Your review on the book didn't even compare 中中 to what the guys did back in figment. Boring you say? Messy? Write something better, let's see it. There were a lot of people at that website who got engaged into that book, and I know the reason why you, people like you didn't, you wanna know why? Well, you already know it, jealous of me? If your not, write something better than mine, post it on figment, wait for the readers to read and give their thoughts and comments on it!

    Oh boy, and here I thought I'd be the only one to leave something a bit constructive to draw on.

    Seriously, grow up, and next time you invite criticism, be prepared for it.
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