Some poems :P

[cRush]

Undiscovered Randomness

I don’t say
"thank you" to god everyday..
Because I think that may
decrease the impact when
I truly mean...
Like this occasion...
Events like this make me believe
that the world is not a random thing.
Undiscovered randomness may invite curiosity…
But randomness can't produce such a being.
Such beauty of yours can only be a creation
of an unnaturally creative force.
Whose actual distinctiveness is indefinite …
I truly thank the God for creating you,
I thank the god for crossing our path so that we've met...
Your presence made this world 100 times better...
I don’t think god will out-do himself later,
You became the only being that truly matters...
You'll continue to shower the world with laughter and beauty...
Just be confident and don’t sweat it!
Happy Birthday!-be always on the cloud nine...
Why worry when I'm there to make your problems mine!

The Dead Dont Care about Vengeance


You cant care about me anymore
because you've left this world a while ago
you stopped hating me not because you love me
its because you've lost all your emotions...

and those emotions seem to have found a way to be airborne
they are making my surroundings heavier..
making my heart and atmosphere around me similar...

Have you ever felt like you are drowning in air ?
Failing to breath ...like there's something stuck in your chest...
I have and I do... Still don't know if there's anything i can do..

The only getaway is writing some verse
trust me I've written worse..
or pressing some piano notes...

I could only hope that you are dead.....
because then you wont care about vengeance

Deleted From Life

I saw you pass me by....
I observed you avoiding me..
but I also heard your cry.

I cant always keep doing this
I know I'll always be the one you miss
but I wish you'll find bliss .

I know you've kept me in the dark
You thought I'll be blinded by love
But I always knew what lurks (in the shadow).

I know you couldn't hate me,
you knew you couldn't make me hate you,
But we both knew love wasn't a option for us.

I always tried to help you
I thought you appreciated my help
but I never thought you could become a betrayer...

I opened my heart to you
I tried to make myself wrong and make you right
but even my self-humiliation couldn't keep our friendship

The things you liked about me became the things you hate.
Must have been a very difficult and punishing decision to make,
Because there were too much intersection in the things we liked.

I like when people point out my mistakes
I thank them and later I want to correct them
but was there any ? I beg to know....

I wanted to conclude this with something good
I figured that would be impossible
and you and I still have so much to loose....

you wish you could have a friend deleting option in real life too right ?

Let me know If you like it

[Mad Monk]

Crush in LOOOOVVVVEEEE.....

poems r Good...keep it up....
tips : i dont like hard words in a simple poem...
if the poem is hard use all hard words...
if the poem is simple use all simple words...
that'll give a Flow...

NJ

[AmareX]

Marhaba.. Bohut khub..

[Codex]

How bout this:
The beauty that is "Friendship"



Life is long... It’s all our own;
but when we are with friends, ‘
estranged’ will be a word never
to be heard. Time is the number
of moments we find, and it fills our lives
with joy and happiness. But when
we part from friends, time will
no longer seem what it used to be.
We never know what the future has
in store, yet the thoughts of friendship
and the bonds we share will bring
us much needed solace. They say time
heals; nevertheless the moment of estrangement
will be hard to heal.







The shadows of life will grow longer
Some days will be happy, some sad,
Yet the friendship you’ve made will grow stronger
As you think of the good times you’ve had.
The days that are gone will leave memories,
And memories are precious to keep;
They bring solace to life like melodious music
That charms you and lulls you to sleep.
A sincere friend is a precious possession,
Whose value increases with years;
Suffering may come to assail you...
Empathetic friends can allay all of your fears.
Our days gather speed in their passing
With multiplied ills that attend...
Yet you’ll weather safely each hurdle
When you feel the embrace of a loyal friend.

[cRush]

Crush in LOOOOVVVVEEEE.....

poems r Good...keep it up....
tips : i dont like hard words in a simple poem...
if the poem is hard use all hard words...
if the poem is simple use all simple words...
that'll give a Flow...

NJ

nah Not currently

well I try to keep them simple always

How bout this:
The beauty that is "Friendship"



Life is long... It’s all our own;
but when we are with friends, ‘
estranged’ will be a word never
to be heard. Time is the number
of moments we find, and it fills our lives
with joy and happiness. But when
we part from friends, time will
no longer seem what it used to be.
We never know what the future has
in store, yet the thoughts of friendship
and the bonds we share will bring
us much needed solace. They say time
heals; nevertheless the moment of estrangement
will be hard to heal.







The shadows of life will grow longer
Some days will be happy, some sad,
Yet the friendship you’ve made will grow stronger
As you think of the good times you’ve had.
The days that are gone will leave memories,
And memories are precious to keep;
They bring solace to life like melodious music
That charms you and lulls you to sleep.
A sincere friend is a precious possession,
Whose value increases with years;
Suffering may come to assail you...
Empathetic friends can allay all of your fears.
Our days gather speed in their passing
With multiplied ills that attend...
Yet you’ll weather safely each hurdle
When you feel the embrace of a loyal friend.

awesome

Here's another. I wrote this for my friend. She complained that I never wrote any poem about her. So I did :

Rhythm for Sadia

I wondered here and there,

looking for a rhythm to satisfy you.

But even after digging all the earth-layer,

I don’t have any clue.

So I gave up hope in the ground and went to the sea.

But after swimming for days and nights

I found nothing worth to see.

So I went to the sky to swim in the clouds

and to find something beautiful enough

to sing it to you loud.

But again after flying for ages, there was nothing beautiful enough for you.

Because you are very special,

so I must find something new!

So I left the earth for the universe,

to find couple of verse.

I’ve searched the whole Milky Way

still I don’t have anything to say.

The universe is very beautiful.

It's like an aesthetic creation.

I've tried to understand it.

But still I have to learn many lessons.

So after failing to find any rhythm,

I started to get some clues.

Sadia, you are the best rhythm in the whole universe.

You’re the most beautiful, there's nothing worthy enough in the world that I can give you.

[D3FC0N]

chorom hoise....liked it very much

[ЯV●shafiee007]

haha...nice....

wcgbd forum-eo ekkale emon ekta topic chilo.....oita obossho onno rokom mojar chilo....gamer-ra gamer der uddhesshe lekhte hehe......Grimmjaw chorom lekhto kobita oi shomoe

[Z]

oikhane na villian god onek kobita lekhto? :S

[ЯV●shafiee007]

kheal nai....ke jani oita shuru korsilo and bhaloi lekhto.....then Fahad bhai-o heavy lekha lekhi lagaisilo hehe

[Z]

VG=VillianGod shuru korsilo .. ami archives e dekhsilam ... DF bhai can confirm that .. tina na kake jeno niye jani lekhsilo VG .. btw VG ke jano?

[Mad Monk]

JOTILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

[patron_saint]

crush, great work! i like the second one most...
the 2nd stanza asks for attention, and in the third u did a synesthesia, which is really tricky! great! great!

here's one i've done only recently...

Welcome to the world

i endure,
i endure these flashing lights
that do not lead me anywhere,
these metallic clanks,
which turns my deaf ears silent.


long before my son crouched into my lap,
long before my dawn came,
when the sirens took my song away,
and this star leaped to its high noon,
i fell.


i fell into the sky,
and I painted it in
a tint so blue,
for my son resides here
at your earliest of hours.
Then I took the hue of a dying rose
to make another song,
to lead hours to their end.

i endured my time to seize what is mine,
now that i want to sleep,
I present you with my sky, my son, my colors
and all that hue.

Welcome to the world...

[cRush]

crush, great work! i like the second one most...
the 2nd stanza asks for attention, and in the third u did a synesthesia, which is really tricky! great! great!

here's one i've done only recently...

chorom !! fatafati bhai!!

[Codex]

Godlike!Who knew that some of us were poets extraordiniare?

[ЯV●shafiee007]

VG=VillianGod shuru korsilo .. ami archives e dekhsilam ... DF bhai can confirm that .. tina na kake jeno niye jani lekhsilo VG .. btw VG ke jano?

VG hoilo portugese NFS player xD

BD er VG ke jani na

[Z]

vg hoilo amader naser bhai

[cRush]

Godlike!Who knew that some of us were poets extraordiniare?

We gamers are always multi-talented

How else would we fight crime with m4 and ak47 at morning with counter-strike and take part in illegal street racing at night

We are multi-tasking multi-talented people with too much energy

[HeaVen^sTEar™]

Deleted From Life

I saw you pass me by....
I observed you avoiding me..
but I also heard your cry.

I cant always keep doing this
I know I'll always be the one you miss
but I wish you'll find bliss .

I know you've kept me in the dark
You thought I'll be blinded by love
But I always knew what lurks (in the shadow).

I know you couldn't hate me,
you knew you couldn't make me hate you,
But we both knew love wasn't a option for us.

I always tried to help you
I thought you appreciated my help
but I never thought you could become a betrayer...

I opened my heart to you
I tried to make myself wrong and make you right
but even my self-humiliation couldn't keep our friendship

The things you liked about me became the things you hate.
Must have been a very difficult and punishing decision to make,
Because there were too much intersection in the things we liked.

I like when people point out my mistakes
I thank them and later I want to correct them
but was there any ? I beg to know....

I wanted to conclude this with something good
I figured that would be impossible
and you and I still have so much to loose....

you wish you could have a friend deleting option in real life too right ?

i like it

[patron_saint]

We gamers are always multi-talented

How else would we fight crime with m4 and ak47 at morning with counter-strike and take part in illegal street racing at night

We are multi-tasking multi-talented people with too much energy

bravo! bravo!

[Codex]

Here's another from me:
"Pure feeling"

Try to imagine yourself,
 standing among golden fields........
Imagine that,pleasant warm breeze
slightly touches your face.........
And.............
She is there in front of you.....
with her smile,
smile of your beloved one.......
Imagine yourself with her ,
Touching her hair...
Looking into her moon shaped eyes
with fields of corn bending in the wind
IMAGINE!THE Feeling of the purest love ever................!




Still I want to even If I can't have it,
I want to believe in love!

This was a bit too corny for my liking.
And I got inspired from the Melancholy of haruhi shuzamiya.Great anime.