do u like poetry ?

[cRush]

sometimes i do ...if they are intelligent...or too dumb..(like mines). heré's one ...

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Rushing my thoughts to infinity
Creating nothing but chaos, showing insanity.
Losing my head, losing all my creativity.
Putting myself into a self-created hell.
Creating around me an invisible, non-existent shell.


My thoughts get diverted to only one person.
It’s not surprising, because I know the reason.
Only my thoughts can reach her now.
I really want to be there. But I don’t know how.


I hear ‘Linkin Park’ all day-long
I try to hide my sadness behind those songs.
I try to understand. I try to be realistic.
But everything’s unreal. God! I need to be more optimistic!

I don’t blame myself for that.
Because this world has driven me mad.
Everything I see everywhere is sad.
I could blame this world for doing that.
But it would make me far from being glad.

I’ve always heard nothing but ‘No’.
I’ve done everything to get a ‘Yes’
But still it was a no-show.

Damn! I love her so much.
But I have nothing to do- I only watch.

Two and half years- Does it sounds long?
After waiting for that long, you tell me I was wrong?

Crazy, insane, mad
There’s nothing left to be said.
So it’s now decided,
what I’ll do.
But my heart is still divided
between yes and no.
In the end
I don’t know what to do or what to show.

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let me know if u love it or hate it....

[EaGL1337]

Awesome stuff man. I write songs NOT poetry. And it's not calm and soothing or about peacefulness. In fact, they're heavy alt rock songs.

[TAW_LegendaryHero]

dude, that was awesome. I am very fond of writing poetry myself. It actually evoked sadness, your poem; very emotional.

One thing: "Does it sound long?" <<< a typo I'm sure.

Keep up the good work and submit more if you can.

Here's mine:

Random Ramblings
Murshid-e-Saqlain


Five months, greater than ages, have passed.
Great songs, sung by sages, would’ve amassed.
So many events, good and bad, we’ve spent.
I look back, to what we had, and dearly lament.
Gone are the days, that felt heavenly, lost with the wind.
Failed have I, badly and evenly, but memoirs aren’t fadin’.

With your touch you branded my flesh, with divine heat.
With your smile, my heart was afresh, with renewed vigor beat.
You spoke honey, you spread joy, cleansing my soul.
With your words, evil you destroy, setting greater a goal.
Your craft impressed, with beautiful art, surpassing any creation.
Your hand blessed, touched my heart, resulting in completion.

You inspired awe, you spread love, so great you are.
I felt great, was lifted above, with no one to bar.
All the five months, greater than great, I always flew.
To the horizon, beyond heaven’s gate, I was with you.
You opened your arms, wide and soothing, to embrace me.
I went in, my brains reeling, becoming finally free.

You showed me with live emotions, the meaning of love.
Peace I felt, transgressing all notions, like a free dove.
You gave me wings, long and beautiful, to fly away.
You I took, my heart plentiful, together we’d sway.
Lands we crossed, laughed a lot, holding each other.
Together, invincible, we had fought, with enemies as a lover –
United, bonded, tied.
Cared, loved, and lied.
Ruled, fooled, and hide.
Together, arm in arm, as eternal lovers.

[EaGL1337]

I may be able to post one of my songs just gotta find the right one.

[Infra Gamer]

i like sonnets...........thats coz my name IS Sonnet

[xK::CREATOR]

I like poetry. but i write CHORAs not poems. I am a chorakar.


EK JOG EK = CHAR

chotobelaye prothom dekha tarpore shokkho
tumi bhalo mala gatho ami khelaye dokkho

tarpore school e dhuki dujone mile
protigga kori amra gorbo nijeder tile tile

school sheshe college e dujon bhorti hoi
ganja biri tani ami bhalo chele noi

dhukla tumi university te ami parlam na
shomoy gelo furiye prem korlam na

tomar ek isharaye tomer babar kache jai
mone mone bhoy, biyer shommoti jeno pai

tomer baper boka kheye mejaj gelo bigre
tumio amaye gali dile bolle ami hijre

are tumi bolo jamai shaji! ki korbe tomer babaji?
biyer pore dujon mile bhajbo begun bhaji!

shesh mesh court e holo moder biye
she ratre dujon mile korlam amra "iye"!!

aat mash jete na jetei holo dui jomoj
bekar ami! ki kore shamlabo eto khoroch?

[EaGL1337]

OK it's all good now cuz that awfully dirty post has been deleted.

[cRush]

OMG These are so good !! I loved both of them Guys post more!!!

Ripping Apartmy Internal System Administration

I thought I’ve given this up for good

But how wrong was I
You were the most beautiful, my eyes ever looked
I’ve seen many, but my eye didn’t lie


The first glimpse of you took my breath away
I went crazy, started acting stupid. And I didn’t know what to say.
My mind was in complete blackout
It is only you who can create such cloud
Love is something one can only feel.
But in the flood of love I am being killed.


You make this world worth living
Everything seems worthless without you
I know it’s a crazy thing to believe in,
that you are present in my every pleasant dream. But it’s true


The more I knew about you. The more I loved you.
I don’t know many things about you. But I know enough to,


I like the way you speak, the way you move.
I like the way you smile, that fills the earth with groove.
I like everything about you.
Whether it’s old fashioned
whether it’s something completely new.


My love is made of truth.
It’s developed with firm trust.
I don’t know what to tell
And I don’t want to rush.
Maybe some people will describe it as a teenager’s crush.
But my love is pure. It’s not a crush.
Still if they do that, it’ll be nothing but harsh.

Life is very complex.
Life’s problems are huge.
To make mine’s simple
I need you.


Sorry for this long poem
But this is not all.
To express my feeling fully
I’ll need a big call.


So at last, tell me sweet,
(‘Sweet’ word is not enough to describe.
I really need to improve my vocabulary.
I really need to strive.)
Will you be mine, my love of life?
I’ll love you all the time, even if it costs my life.

[EaGL1337]

Awesome!! Totally AWESOME!!

[xK::CREATOR]

$hit, engreji kobita likhte hobe.

nice one though.

[cRush]

i like sonnets...........thats coz my name IS Sonnet

sonnets are great and fun. but sometimes they may restrict the poet. That can be bad.

[Tian]

Beware you people passing by.
As you are now, so once was I.
And as i'm now, so must you be.
Now prepare for death and follow me.

[Noob™]

"Kul Auju bi rabbin Nas, Malikin Nas, Ilahin Nas."( It means, I want help from the God of the men, God of the Kings, God of the Gods.)

where did u get this translation from? there are not many gods in islamic belief. the correct translation should be- "Say: 'I seek refuge with the Lord of mankind, The King of mankind, The God of mankind'"

[Tian]

You are right Salman bhai. It is the main problem of translating the raw Quran(Without Tafsir) with little Arabic knowledge.

[Noob™]

well you shouldnt try without achieveing appropriate knowledge.

[cRush]

well you shouldnt try without achieveing appropriate knowledge.

agree 100%.

[CHR.Mnemonic]

amra poetry er majhe Quran tene na ani better hobe .................r achchca vaira khali love chara ki poetry hoy na???............r eto valobashabashi valo lagena notun jinish chai.........but u guys those poems r gr8., keep on writing for ur loving ones & thank for sharing.....but one is behind everyones notice "Tian" i like ur four lines that u wrote........

[TAW_LegendaryHero]

Actually, poetry is all about release of emotions through words. Quite frankly, Love inspires me to release my feelings. I do also write random poems for my novel, and sometimes very very dark literary pieces.

[yagamirules]

Place of freaks. Gotta get out. lol. good going guys. you guys have some talents.keep it up.

[Dhumketu]

@cRush Can I re-ACTIVATE this Thread???